高考结束了，我们邀请了4位上海四大名校（不知道四大名校，可以看这里脑补下，四大名校指上海中学、华师二附中、复旦附中、交大附中）的学霸给大家写了四篇英语作文的范文。名校学霸真是不虚此名，小编觉得这作文水平都可以跟当年考研的水准相当了，膜拜下。应学生要求，我们没有署名，不过据了解，这4位同学都已经拿到名校的了。想知道我们怎么邀请到的吗？很简单啦，四大名校的多位英语教师都是我们《全新英语阅读》这套丛书的作者了，而这4位学霸又是我们作者的学生，所以近水楼台啊。《全新英语阅读》系列已上市，详情可以拉到文尾点”阅读原文“可了解详情。
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作文 | 2016上海高考英语作文真题
假设你是中华中学一名中学生，最近你正在参与一个研究性学习研究调查，调查课题为“关于父母是否对孩子感到骄傲”。
1.简要描述这些数据
2.分析该原因
父母：对孩子感到骄傲
80%
孩子：认为父母对自己感到骄傲
60%
范文1
we have a the in our and to find out are of . It out that 80% of the take in , only 60% of the are of them. The that from the ’ , they are not that good to live up to ’ .
One may be that are with . They kids to be , to be and . Even if a goal, they will not give any to be away by the . , what hear is and from .
As for , we tend to our . This is the of our , to some . We are not used to our , , . So most do not kids or say " I’m of you" even when they do love and they have done a job.
As we can see, many to the . We to to and we hope a and can be . all, is a for love and love!
范文2
I'm Yao Ping from High . I’ve a on “ are of ”. As is in the , 80% of are of only 60% of the kids know they`re of, me food for .
What’s the ? From I am , it may from the of , in , tend to have more and less .
, have the : a man with a in hand, than , and the “ ” is a one of them. They that is no such as an kid from . Thus, feel more of of in ` but warm eyes.
In , lack of may be . Due to our , and kids love for each . , , no of good and kids, and kids are less to the of , is and them back.
To put in a , it is the of in that make the . in the and hard to as it , both , , step , and the , and show the and love for each .
范文3
A has been out on take in . the of our and , we got the , as is in the . 80% of the said that they did, 60% of the gave the same . It's a of , but than the of .
It is that most feel of . This the pure love of . No how or how one is, he is the ' and they will be on his side, him as a of life.
, many this to . But why do some can't ’ ?
The be the of love. True love from , and we can only feel it by . If is the of , the may miss the due to lack of and self–.
So may as well tell that they are of them, can ' .
范文4
are the two who keep us , us, take care of us and all they have to us we were born. our long path, ’s a on the and . I, , thus held a on my and . The turn out that 80% of are of only 60% of do so.
dose the go? From my , two to it. is . show ’s back for fear that they be too over- to well. When it to face-to-face , to out , the fact that more than .
On the hand, are also to for and less to . We work hard and are so to win and . When we don’t get what is , we are into , , , and lose the to calm down and . , we fail to find out how deep our love us and how they are we a lot.
The the gap. , as long as and make , can we the gap, each and a idea.
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